a. Abstract description needs to be avoided. The story of the plot should be expressed with rather practical actions and emotions. For instance, if this sentence "The dead bored atmosphere makes her hesitated. I don't know where to go and what to do ¡K" is changed to "Dim light and the mist that penetrate into the room make her tightly closing her depressed eyebrows. Standing in front of the semi-open door, I really don't know where the road in front me leads to?", then the site scene, location, lighting, emotional expression and action are all clearly expressed. And even the shots and outlooks are already cut. In this way, a very clear instruction is provided to storyboard.

b. Clearly write time, distance, size of space and speed, For instance, if "She is seen to coil up at the corner of a large space, and the threatener is gradually approaching ¡K" is changed to "In a space about half a basketball court, her thin frail body & shadow lying coiled at the corner piled up with straw. Her startled eyes seem to see the threatener's body & shadow coming in through the door step by step ¡K", this also practically expresses the images clear.

c. Sound/voice and shooting treatment must clearly be written, For instance, "Cameras focuses to distant sky in countless stars, moves downward to pull diagonally through high ** buildings and stops the focus at the telephone booth on street corner. Several barks of wild dogs are transmitted from far end, lens enters to an open phone directory, "Hello! Hello ! " call is heard from the nearby mouthpiece that was not properly hung ¡K", this manner is believed to have described the images very clearly.